Michelle Phan look... YAY or NAY?

This is my first attempt at a Michelle Phan "lookalike". I know it's not great, but is this something you guys would want to see?

It was inspired by this tutorial that her sister-in-law, Promise Tamang-Phan made for her based on Michelle's signature look. (Michelle is on the right, Promise is on the left)

Let me know in the comments if you want to see a tutorial on an IMPROVED version of this look, and how you think I could improve it.

Thanks for reading this, I REALLY appreciate it :)

Love

Claire xoxo